true I realised trying to make mouth shapes and keep a duck shape mouth was a challenge which is why when I did my lip synch sheet I got rid of the duck shape mouth
I agree with you the eyes could be better I've been reading and drawing a lot more eyes to understand the simplification process of communicating with the eyes, I chose a greyish colour to make them more silvery/specular but I'll go back to the drawing board and change them to standard black and see how that works.
but thanks for the advice