architecture Modern Building

[faiz0calicut]

Hay Guys Iam Back again with my latest Work A Modern Buliding .
I have modelled in 3D Max And added VRAY Materials
And Rendered in VRAY with VRAY Light & a Target Spot Light.



BTW I got VRAY Settigs from some web & i played a little with that.


This image took 2 hrs to RENDER.

The Redered Image I got was noisy So Iused NEAT IMAGE PLUGIN in Photoshop also tried some other stuffs.

But There Are Some Parts were there will be some errors .I think Clouds need adjustments...


COMMENTS PLEASE

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HELP

Iam Studying Animation in an Institute .
They teached me Modelling , Particles.And other cool Stuffs.


BUt I didnt get much classes on [REALISTIC]RENDERING ,LIGHTING & UVW TEXTURING.

So i decieded to learn through Net these .

IF U GUYS KNOW ANY SITES that would help me in this .

BTW I dont know Wat is Shaders ,PELT MAPPING... Some other stuffs in 3D.

Is there any WIKIPEDIA FOR 3D TERMS

I cant google every Word iam studying in 3D


Guys HELP....

[faiz0calicut]

Guys Comments Please

[Jelmer]

It looks ok, but there's still a lot to improve on. First of all some of the parts on the house don't seem to have any function, like the rectangular cutouts on the right.. Are they windows? Furthermore the windows itself are very dark, you should really make them more like regular windows which you can actually see through. Also the car model looks low poly and unrealistic.

I would also replace the plants, especially the one on the far right, the worst part though is lighting, behind the car "under" the house there's a rather bright spot, where you would expect more dark parts, finally I would add more colour overall and replace the sky.