character shortmovie "Milo- the baby giraffe "

[KoRnflakes]

don't worry Peter Salvatore i don't copy u its just the cartoony version of a baby giraffe =P
...so again a character for my new idea for a short.
It would be the MAIN character "Milo - the baby giraffe" the concept etc was created nearly 3years ago, after my lil nephew called "milo" was born, and now i want to "reanimate" my idea in 3d .. so what u think about it.

a Sum from the story > Milo sleeps the whole day, like a hard working baby does. One day he wake up and his parents are away. And here starts his journey to find them. In Milos adventure he meets many other animals, a lil grashopper (some of ya might know my char philly), a lil mice (look at my other WIP thread), a fish etc. and milo ask everybody if they know where his parents are gone. And they would help him. So it is a story as usual about friendships, "civil"courage and how important parents are.

So thats the task for the next year hope to get it to xmas '08 we will c =)
Every Crit, Feedback or advice is very helpful and welcome. Thx

And this is the first Wip of Milo.

[Jelmer]

Great idea, I can visualize it already . I really like the model you have, it will fit in well with your other character (see avatar). He looks a bit clumsy, which is the idea right? Maybe the hoofs are just a little too large but everything else looks great, can't wait for some animations!

[KoRnflakes]

ok thx. will work on it and maybe post a first rough animation as an easteregg =)

[geldslaw]

I agree with Jelmer, it's so important to have a story that just fits to one page, and i forget the name they use for it, never mind, lol. Be good to see your storyboard and animatic if you have them. currently working on mine for my first year project.

But so far great work coming from you and looking forward to seeing more, keep it up.

[blossoms]

milo looks gr8...can't wait to see the animated story....u've created a gud story board,such a kinda story works really well on characters that are animal......

Best of Luck!