non-organic Assault Sniper Rifle

[chaotix]

Hey, Tis bin a while since ive posted ... thought id try and make some kind of rifle ...



Bits need adding and smoothing yet

[Motammad]

wow. i see you've used different reference pics... looks like a cool combo of: Barrett M95, FN SCAR,... something else...
awesomely modeled... and yeah, needs quite a lot of smoothing... and that bipod looks a bit too thin compared to the rest of the rifle...

[TE_]

a nice weapon ,,, but i think it would be more nicer when it will not be so sharp,, some round shapes would look better there =) ,, and maybe its only the render, but its little short, or not????

[Jelmer]

certainly a good start, i like the details, Some parts could be a bit rounder and better designed such as the grip, so it fits well into your hands, other parts could use some chamfering if you didn't do that already, it's a bit hard to see in this render. As motammad already said, the bipod looks a bit thin and small compared to the rifle, looking forward to more.

[socomsniperaj]

Looking good. Like the others have said it looks a little short an the bipod is reall small. I like the design, perhaps I could find out how to replace weapons in socom when its done lol

[DAKLOL]

very nice design. although it wouldnt really be practical being that wide, especially the handle.

[Radical Edward]

Looks awsome. Love the detail and cant wait to see a texture or colouring on it, then it will look fantastic.

I did a small futuristic turret which floats above a base for a PM project, it's not nearly as good as yours but tell me what you think.

[chaotix]

Thanks for the comments

I went back and had a "re-model" shape and size, so its not quite a sniper now, but the assault is still there lol



Still editing

[Jelmer]

cool, i like this version better, the render is a bit blurry though, and the grip is still a bit square, you shoulud definately work on that, the rest of it looks fine, with some dirty metal textures it could turn out great!
Radical edward, please start your own threads if you want critique on your own work!

[fsd]

Looks nice. i think the handle and ammo could be a bit longer.
the first one looks better in the back. (or is it the blur?)