character WIP _ Short"film" Philly is comin

[Jelmer]

lol, what's that falling from the sky, looks a bit like poo to be honest, maybe it is? The flying is not too convincing right now, he seems to float in the sky instead of flying, I think you need to make the wings move much faster and also motion blur would add a sense of speed.

[KoRnflakes]

@float did u mean the middle part ? this should be something like the matrix effekt...

and yes that i mean with spoiler that is ..poo =)


...need more feedback ..is it ok to go on the final with this style ?

[KoRnflakes]

more than 4month are gone since i've done something with philly...

and now the time is come to reanimate him.

I've done a little animation yesterday Look here

hope u like it and as usual Every feedback is welcome also the bad ones!

[geldslaw]

excellent animation, lighting and rendering was awsome. as for the character jumping and landing on the ball its brilliant, still think the jump should be quicker at the start and slower towards the apex of the leap then speeds up when approaching the ball.

but its the classic bouncing ball principle that we all learn about when first animating a character. good to see your work coming along

[Jelmer]

Nice, It would be nice to see this in real time (this is slow motion right?) just to see how the timing looks then, but so far it looks very good, looking forward to more.

[robinmitra1]

Originally Posted by Jelmer

Nice, It would be nice to see this in real time (this is slow motion right?) just to see how the timing looks then, but so far it looks very good, looking forward to more.

i did second that

[KoRnflakes]

well normally...if i'm honest--- i do not want this slowmotion look ...but that said me that i have to speed up it a little thanx alot =)

i practise for a very short story bout philly and the ball think end of the week i can post it