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Old 30th May 2007
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a dream house...

hey guys,

i made this house up from imagination using 3ds max. I would really appreciate your comments on how I could improve etc. The new renders are:

http://www.sharecg.com/v/3432/3d-and.../A-Dream-House - wireframe
http://www.sharecg.com/v/3434/3d-and.../A-Dream-House - clay
http://www.sharecg.com/v/3435/3d-and.../A-Dream-House - final
http://www.sharecg.com/v/3437/3d-and.../A-Dream-House - final
http://www.sharecg.com/v/3436/3d-and.../A-Dream-House - final

Please let me know your thoughts,

Thanks, Paul

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Looks interesting, I like the shadows of the trees on the front of the house, but you can still improve a lot on the lighting, right now the shadows seem to lack some contrast, they're all pretty much the same colour, which doesn't look very realistic. I'm not sure what renderer and settings you're using, but if you have max9 i would definitely advice mental ray (daylight system) with final gather and possibly GI too (global illumination).

The grass looks good modeling wise, but again, it's quite plain, i would add some highlights here and there, and definitely some colour variation to increase the realism.

*next time please attach at least one image when posting final work.
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yeah,, verry nice man ,, like jelmer said it need a little work on the lightning and maybe few details ,, but like i said verry nice and i think good job man ,, when its your dreams house,, where are the womens? heh
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hey very nice design, like jelmer pointed the shadows look a bit plain.

Kinda looks like my dream house except there would be a corvette in the drive-way
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