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Old 11th April 2007
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Modern Bed Room

hello all,
this is one of my works with 3ds max and vray
i hope u like it






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Very cool, i really light the lighting. 1 thing though, i think the lamps seem unnatural where it shines on the walls, especially in the daytime.
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Overall you did quite a good job i think, although some parts of your scene have a very 'cg' look you should try to avoid if you're going for realism. For example, the apples don't look very realistic (like plastic?) and the surface they're standing on needs some work as well, i think it's supposed to be leather but it's a bit too regular, is it procedural?

Some surfaces could also use chamfering, the windows look a bit unrealistic because they're too sharp I think.
The lighting is very well done overall, although I do agree with DAKLOL's comment.

Just another thing that could be changed, i'm not sure, but the black leather chair next to the bed looks a bit small, it could just be me, but it looks a bit out of proportion (compared to the bed)
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thx for ur comments ....

MR CU441ES, Where are th other images (daytime and setting corner ) ???!!!!
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i dunno, but they all seem to be broken links, maybe the host is down...
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they work fine for me, i have to say, the first render is definitely the best and much more realistic compared to the 2nd render in my opinion! The atmosphere is also better, more like an early morning sunset, which is quite appropriate! The third render is pretty good but I'm not sure about the proportions of the table - chairs - apples, otherwise you've done a great job.
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thx Jelmer for ur comment
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