asking for help

[hendry]

hi everyone,i,m a new comer & i like to learn about 3d please teach me, i only know a little about 3d.thank u

i also submit a picture that i made with 3d please comment it and tell whats wrong with the picture thanks

[greeney]

very nice work there m8 ^_^ a lot better than when i was beginning lol

id say lower the plane so its touching the floor....and texture it lol

[hendry]

thank, for the comment, is there anything else that i need to make that plane more real beside the material?

thank you

[kidlizard]

Detail. Detail. Detail. Oh did I mention details. =)

[Shipwright]

It looks like the wing support struts are a little thicker than they should be. Do a Google image search for "biplane" and you'll see what I mean. The outer struts tend to be thick (although not as thick as yours) and the cross struts are usually thin (sometimes only a heavy wire).

Also the wheels appear a bit wide.

The fuselage and wing shapes look very nice as does the propeller, which is really the hardest part of a model like that.

Good job!

MD

[ExTaZ]

There is always no wrong with pictures :P it depends on the angle of your vision that you see it and images are never wrong or bad... They can only get better :P
And as your skill will improve ou will see that you can do amazing things

I have noticed it

[nakulchauhan]

Hii Hendry!!

I'd like to give a suggestion. See, when we make something in 3D, our foremost stress should be on realism. This applies to every kind of work, whether it's a realistic environment to even a cartoon character. So, if you make something to which you're not much familiar in real world, then first make yourself familiar with it, or something that closely resembles it.

I gave this small lecture cause a found a few basic mistakes in your airplane. I would definitely admire that model technically, but practically it wouldn't give an impression of a realistic thing... Like the propellers are too short in radius to drag this whole weight into air. The supports for tyres are too thin handle the weight of the plane. And the supports supporting the wings are too thick and would add to unnecessary weight in the plane....

So my main point is, the model should follow the laws of physics, nature, to look attractive... I hope you got my point...

Thanx
NC

[hendry]

thank for the comment & the lecture , i will note that and correct my work. because when i model that plane i 'm not using a picture or sample it just came out from my head.. and maybe that why my airplane not look real i will correct it...thank you once again for the comment , if any body want to give critics or comment just write it ok

[hendry]

here is the result after i fix the plane

[Jelmer]

Looks pretty good hendry, if you want to continue working on this and show us work in progress you can use the 3d work in progress forum, you can still improve a few things, the body and lower wing don't connect very well I think and more detail can be added, do you have good reference material because that helps as well?? Keep going though, you're doing well!